All Comments on 'Old Nor'easter'

by LuciousBi-Writes4U

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
excellent flow

like a wind that blow~

(I am curious now, what is nor easter?)

the poem was excellent and flowed well, enchanting read.

LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Ualmost 19 years agoAuthor
COMMENT FROM THE AUTHOR!

hey there...Okay... a North Easter is a storm... kinda like a tropical storm only one step down...we had one Friday morning here onn the East Coast...which is why I was inspired to write this one! ;)

LOL

sorry didn't think about the fact that others wouldn't know what one was...

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 19 years ago
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Good poem. Reminds me of a much older style of poetry.

The last two lines of this stanza are a little off:

Water water everywhere

Ditches fill and overflow

Roads flood

And everything has turned to mud

Maybe you could try something like this:

Water water everywhere

Ditches fill and overflow

And the Roads flood

All turned to mud

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