by LuciousBi-Writes4U
like a wind that blow~
(I am curious now, what is nor easter?)
the poem was excellent and flowed well, enchanting read.
hey there...Okay... a North Easter is a storm... kinda like a tropical storm only one step down...we had one Friday morning here onn the East Coast...which is why I was inspired to write this one! ;)
LOL
sorry didn't think about the fact that others wouldn't know what one was...
Good poem. Reminds me of a much older style of poetry.
The last two lines of this stanza are a little off:
Water water everywhere
Ditches fill and overflow
Roads flood
And everything has turned to mud
Maybe you could try something like this:
Water water everywhere
Ditches fill and overflow
And the Roads flood
All turned to mud