All Comments on 'third dip and swallow'

she dances with words

from the the future

to the prehistoric past

you are my monolith

of words, my GAL

talk to me in space

Stunning anna.. a swirling write of depth and fantastic reality of the personality ...depth and musical

thank you for the read

du lac~

Your poem was mentioned in Monday's New Poems Reviews.

except that "day-old cud" part! Beautiful mages throughout, anna.

Fly

Why am I not permitted to vote on this masterpiece?

crushed raspberries and cave walls, honey I am THERE!

Bloody Excellent!

have stopped with the first two verses and it would have been a great poem.

Some great images ( i like the "cud" part)

I just want to know whose footsteps you saw??

Thank you

yeahyeahyeah

that's what i say when i come.