All Comments on 'Breather'

tightly woven words wrapped into the perfect picture. This I like!

~Syn

it made me think of a whoosh of air , mixed with " her' perfume and yet

she's no where to be seen.

Nice piece

Damn near perfect

....Of well written words!

Thanks for the smile;)

This one's a winner!

of words and image being inseparable! Brilliant, Liar.

Pretty, but how does this qualify as "poetry?"

I loved the "drifted through the room" line enclosed in smoke shown in the illustration that gave it a mystical look and thereby enhanced the meaning. The verse and picture are indeed inseparable. Top Notch.

Perfect fit between words and illustration; trolly knows not wherefrom he {or it} speaks.

and to compost pile returned, TK U MLJ LV NV