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by Anonymous

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by angelicminx05/20/05

Blurry...

...as you already said on the thread, but not terrible. Loved the poem and the concept. Keep it up! ~Minx

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by Anonymous05/20/05

Reaching

Reading the poem I sense you are reaching for something and almost getting there. I like the short poem but I wouldn't include the title in the image and I would think more about the spatial layout of the actual text.

That criticism sounds like I'm destroying your work. I'm not, I like what you did. I'm rooting for you because I sense you are on the edge of achieving something. The poem and the image make sense together.

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by Jennifer C05/20/05

Enjoed it

Good work,
very interesting.
Thanks.
~ J

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by Bridget6905/20/05

A slam dunk...

of a poem. Clearly illustrates the hits and misses of life.

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by duddle14612/28/06

clear shot.

The swooshes in the poem can only be the sound of a basketball slipping magically through the net. The picture of a basketball net adds to the ambiance of this poem.

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by LeBroz02/07/07

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Those moments in life when everything comes together.

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by LeBroz02/07/07

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Those moments in life when everything comes together.

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by tazz31703/10/12

AND YOU DONT HAVE TO DUNK

or hit a 3 pointer, TK U MLJ LV NV

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