All Comments on 'Anne's First Erotic Massage'

I'm sitting here squirming in my chair reading this and cursing you for stopping where you did!

Well what happened next - I'm rampant and waiting to read Part 2 - Don't stop now!

Twelve words before the end of the story it says she "Began". That's no way to end a story. There are a multitude of readers wanting to know what happened after those twelve words and the period that markes the end of the story.

More please...

Surely p_l_chill isn't going to leave readers wondering what happens next; no author would be that cruel. Chapter 2 should continue this very stimulating plot line, because we have to know what more Anne will experience under Fifi's very talented hands. In my private practice as a certified massage therapist, I specialized in giving clients equally sensuous massages. As in this story, the massage strokes would slowly become increasingly intimate, introducing the client to ever-higher levels of eroticism. They invariably resulted in his or her stimulating sexual release, and I'd acquired another repeat client. Although retired, I still enjoy giving sensuous massages. I can now afford to give them without charge, so I have a wide variety of body types on which to perfect my erotic massage techniques. I look forward to reading more chapters of this story, because p_l_chill is one of the most arousing authors on this web site.

The story was too short, there could have been more of a buildup in the beginning, like why she wanted to experience a "Erotic Massage." Then you had me captured with your description of the two women and what was about to take place. Then you cut to soon to the finish.

I should have been a 3 page story.

very very good

Great build up and a bad ending. Sure the reader can imagine on their own but if that's the goal - why bother with literotica? Just have everyone imagine what they want. No need for stories.