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angelicminxangelicminxalmost 19 years agoAuthor
That didn't quite work as planned... sigh.

The heart was suppose to be next to the arrow. Oh, well. I tried. :D ~Minx

minsueminsuealmost 19 years ago
It may not have come out as you'd expected,

but it's still a lovely and touching tribute. =0)

LiarLiaralmost 19 years ago
I'd say it worked out well

With the heart on a line of it's own it stands out more. Like the answer to a riddle. Either way it's nicely done.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
stages

A little girl going her formative stages to growing up. This poem points out the many facets that occur in a young girl's early life. Beautifully illustrated.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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At first I saw the double acrostic but I was wondering about all those asterisks until I saw your comment and took a more long-distance look and saw the arrow. I see what you were trying to do; I think it would've looked great that way ~ if only...

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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At first I saw the double acrostic but I was wondering about all those asterisks until I saw your comment and took a more long-distance look and saw the arrow. I see what you were trying to do; I think it would've looked great that way ~ if only...

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Youth is so sweet...

and mothers guidance is a must.

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
A CHIP OFF THE BLOCK

and an apple near a tree. TK U MLJ LV NV

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