when she put her lips to mine.... i think i came right there for the 1st time in my life.....
now that is hot writing!! loved it!
can't wait for the next chapter!
yummy, a very tastey tail
2 of 2 like you two
excellent story, very ...lucious
Love the fragment, "...uncharted erogenous zones that would forever bring me pleasure now that they'd finally been awakened."
and just jumping to be ivaded"...now that's a descriptive sentence! loved it...full of humor, uncertainty and pleasure! just the right mixture of everything!
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