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Janie and Me: How I Lost... Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/23/05

mmmm hot!

when she put her lips to mine.... i think i came right there for the 1st time in my life.....

now that is hot writing!! loved it!
can't wait for the next chapter!

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by My Erotic Tale05/23/05

finger licking good!

yummy, a very tastey tail
2 of 2 like you two
excellent story, very ...lucious

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by Bill Dada05/30/05

Pleasure awakened!

Love the fragment, "...uncharted erogenous zones that would forever bring me pleasure now that they'd finally been awakened."

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by Anonymous07/17/05

"unplundered...

and just jumping to be ivaded"...now that's a descriptive sentence! loved it...full of humor, uncertainty and pleasure! just the right mixture of everything!
GREAT READ!

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