All Comments  for

Cyanide Smile

byWanton Vixxxen©
All
Comments (27)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous05/18/05

A black widow poem

We men are suckers and fall for that smile every time.

b'brig

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous05/18/05

penned

with black ink am sure...great write.o)) blue

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Syndra Lynn05/18/05

brilliant bits throughout

this wonderful poem. I especially like this:

She seeped into your dreams tonight
Like toxic waste of lust

Nice work!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Captured...

in your web... now come and eat me lol! :) Not much else to say but WOW! Great poem hun xxx

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Jennifer C05/18/05

Brilliant

A work of art!
Loved every line,
great stuff, really
well done.
Thanks.
~ J

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by twelveoone05/18/05

*

here I am like an old school marm; would change "waste" to some other word, used too often
Like toxic waste of lust
You are good with end rhyme, me not being a fan of it
Very good

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous05/18/05

mention

your poem has been mentioned in todays reviews

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by My Erotic Tale05/18/05

kiss of death?

riviting, a very gripping poem! this would make steven king or edgar allen poe proud a very clever right, I send you hugs not kisses right??

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by ishtat05/18/05

#

My wife read this,said nothing, and smiled.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Raindear81605/18/05

DEEP, DARK, AND DELICIOUSLY...

TRUE!
Vixx, your talent is just off the charts! I love how you can end a poem with a thought provoking phrase or sentence; the kind that causes the hairs on the nape of the reader's neck to rise.
Again, this is another testament to your brilliance as a writer. Thank you for the privilege being able to read your amazing work!
;) Ash

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by dcpoet4405/18/05

the rhyme i see....

here, gives the piece its seductive hold of magnetic tease. taint the heart with this toxic doom has left me succumbed in its powder of lure. this ought to tell you that i love this very much!!!......we really need to set up two plates soon.......don

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Bridget6905/18/05

Smiling...

at the idea of such tempting yet dangerous seduction.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by 05/18/05

come here, baby

and kiss me. I want what you got Vix...

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Kirk48200205/19/05

***

Whew!

Shit.

Whew!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Many Feathers05/19/05

Oh yeah baby...

Almost TOO close to home! Like the viper that slithers into the night, invading the spirit, the heart and soul, striking it's evil poison, paralzing, unable to breathe. Unless an antidote can be found, given. Love is that healing sav. Even across vast distances it can cure, sooth, and bring about recovery.

Very well done my very special friend. Very well done.

I am...Many Feathers. But then you know, I will always remain...*wink*

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous05/20/05

OHHHHHHHH so Wicked

Such images this poem fills my head with...wicked dear lady very wicked

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by impressive06/02/05

Toxic waste of lust

Great phrase! Wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing! ~Imp

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by LeBroz07/20/05

Defenseless

Ohhhhhh - that smile

The one that makes men mad and losing all resolve
submitting to all her desires, just for another glimpse
of that soul-dissolving smile.

It lights him up as well, he floats for days on end
and when all else is lost, remembers that potent smile.

I close my eyes, I look away, my freedom's just too dear
But should I find that special one,
I'll look without a moment's fear
and submit my soul for all eternity.

Vixxx - you've found me out - my deepest, darkest, secret weakness revealed - this goes to my list of favs.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous03/09/06

Wow!!

She sounds like a deadly Black Widow!

Patricia

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by EmJ038503/18/06

She's BAD

She is so bad - she has GOT to be a vampire sucking the life right out of you. And you say it so sweetly, this has just GOT to be a fav!!!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by OSoBuff03/31/06

Which raises an interesting question---

With those killer smiles that they wield, are not women the true vampires? I'll never look on her smile in such trusting innocence.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by SweetDeal03/31/06

Now THAT's a smile!!

Any woman knows the power of her smile; this woman you write of here carries that power even further until her victim begs for her to have her way with him!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by CaPic26704/11/06

The Power of a Smile!

I saw this as one of Leon's faves and read it awhile back (and immediately made it a fave of mine as well). Just now getting around to commenting. That's a pretty dark and sexy look at the power of a woman. With just a smile get men to do your bidding--in the real world too, of course. Done all in innocence it can be soooo much fun. They'll never know what hit 'em!!! CP

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by BikeNut04/24/06

Our secrets revealed

We all know that, the power of our smiles and the things we can get a mere mortal man to do for us. They are soooo easy! Billie

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous08/06/06

fuck. so good

omg. this is wonderful. hot hot heat baby. hot hot heat.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Amyfriend01/21/07

Deep..

deadly and so powerful.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by LeBroz05/09/07

~~

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.



----------

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Cyanide Smile  or
More submissions by Wanton Vixxxen.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel