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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/25/05

Good Literotica

Excellent approach on a subject (Horror) combination with erotic. Next time don't be so quick to close as I thought you had a great series here.

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by Anonymous05/28/05

Eeeurch!

Fiction aside, I'm damned glad I'm no one Mirk would be intersted in. *shudders*

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by texas_mojo05/29/05

Intriguing, but...

Great start to an intriguing story. You caught me right away, built me up, and dropped me like a prom date who says no prom night.

You fed the darkness in me and I would love to read more from you.

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by Anonymous10/19/05

Different

I've never read erotic horror before. Yours was not too violent for me and the imagery great. Will definitely check out your other stories.

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by 10/19/05

More.

It's dark and sensual and forbidden...much more needs to come of this....

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by ChevyGirl6701/02/07

Hope to see more.

Really good story, I hope to read a second chapter.

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by Anonymous01/04/07

Aw, c'mon!!

Damn, dude...
MORE violence and definately MORE SEX. Too good of a story line to not deliver more.

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by Anonymous07/05/07

OMG!!!

Man u have to write more of that story! It has action, sex, lust all wrapped into one! Please write more! =)

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by Ravishing07/09/07

Extremely ..

Enjoyable read. Loved it from start to finish. Finding I have to agree with other's here. It has all the right bits for you to write another.

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by Anonymous02/25/08

raoooww

This was some fucking (literally) awesome storie. Please extend on it and perhaps make it so a movie can be made of it. ];-)>

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by FatBottomedGirl03/09/08

wow

very very very erotic. made me wet myself (in a good way)

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by Anonymous02/22/09

Loved it.

SO FUCKING HOT. Taps right into my deepest fantasies.

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by Anonymous07/05/09

warned?

Good concept, very erotic, but the fight scene could be handled better than just using a wall of text. Lost my attention a bit there. Also, the warning at the beginning was unnecessary. I was expecting something dark, and was disappointed.

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by BitchInBlack03/21/10

HAWT!!!

Well-written, short and sweet, and it gets the blood flowing. Damn, that's just how I like to play. More Mirk!

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