by Aprilia
Your very poor use of English makes it appear as though English is not your native tongue, and yet you have quite a good vocabulary. You have trouble with the tenses of verbs and often use two tenses in the same sentence. Make an effort to enrol in a basic English class or study with an experienced teacher.
I felt rushed like you were in a hurry for the reader to finish the story instead of letting the reader wander through it.
I liked that you got to the point. sex stories with details always get me off. this one made my pussy mucles clench up and throb. best one yet.
i love stories about bosses and their secretaries.
you got me stroking my pussy while reading this.
hope you make a part 2.