All Comments on 'Her Horrible Holiday'

by Winterfrog

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wetapapwetapapalmost 19 years ago
short and sweet

as usual. short, sweet and to the point. cheating wife gets her just due. keep up the good work. sure wish you would do a chapter two on "swimmer saves marriages". the wife should have to also pay for her cheating with the swimmer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
i kinda felt sorry for ella, even if a cheater

ella, even if a lousy cheater, was played and used by her 'friend' karen and Mikis the pimp/gigilo. but i supposes if you swim in the sewer you have got to expect rats.

Karen's poor husband got the worst of it - marraige ruined, and he got the VD from Karen that ruin his post marraige life.

Ella's husband was lucky.

fakers51fakers51almost 19 years ago
Women are such trusting....

Women are such trusting creatures with each other. It was a shame that Ella was so weak to let Karen talk her into going on this vacation. Ella's husband though he was a lout for sports, tried to talk her out of going yet she went, so she deserved her fate. Karen I didn't know was married. It was thought she was a free spirit who wanted to have renewal with a lover in Greece and It cost her dearly.

fakers51fakers51almost 19 years ago
Women are such trusting....

Women are such trusting creatures with each other. It was a shame that Ella was so weak to let Karen talk her into going on this vacation. Ella's husband though he was a lout for sports, tried to talk her out of going yet she went, so she deserved her fate. Karen I didn't know was married. It was thought she was a free spirit who wanted to have renewal with a lover in Greece and It cost her dearly.

PAPATOADPAPATOADalmost 19 years ago
His strong forte.

Keep writing the types of stories that you do best. You have a nice knack for making interesting fantasies seem real. Love the accent. Don't let the nay sayers get you down.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
At Last

A happy ending from a slutwife story. One that would happen in the real world of sport fucking a married woman. disease and heartbreak and the rest of their lives to think about what they had lost.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
I assume the husband got the pictures from Mikis

If so, I see this as a good example of the futility of paying blackmailers. They say, "Do this and no one will know," but they've already shown that they are untrustworthy. At least in this case, Mikis wanted money, not more sex. In that type of blackmail story, all the victim does is give the blackmailer more trangressions to use against the victim.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Excellent Work-as usual!

I really appreciate your style and please keep up the great work.

gizzmo301gizzmo301almost 19 years ago
Great

Another great story, loved it keep up the good work. I like all your stories, they all show cheat dose not pay.

don87654don87654almost 19 years ago
Good, but could have been better

Good story plot, but sex acts could have been much more descriptive.

DavefoDavefoalmost 19 years ago
Cheaters always get punished......

I love the moral of these stories, too many people talk about

sex (outside their marriage) like it is a sport. It hurts

people and you ALWAYS get caught, sooner or later. ALWAYS!!!

You might bullshit the fans, but you can't bullshit the players. My ex makes Ella look like Mother Teresa.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Bitter tale

Greeks should all die. Nothing worthwhile ever came from Greece.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I was mixed on the story

I like your stories with a non wimp husband. This story I did not know if I liked it or not. There was little interaction with the husband, which I like in stories. What happened to the wife I liked, but I have to rate this as average. I still would like to see more from you.

Nightowl22Nightowl22about 18 years ago
The wages of sin!

Careful what you ask for; etc.

One way or another, the screwing around will come out where it will do you the most harm. In her case it most certainly did.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Once again a cheating dumb ass stupid

cunt of a cheating wife got paid for her stupidity and cheating...to bad many other wives d not end up like her. Maybe I've found my mission in life. To expose cheating wives.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Sad but deserved...

Theres not much to comment on. Great story other than not saying much about the husband's feelings in this one... Still, we all love your stories. Of course, I have the picture in my mind after reading all your stories that your scandanavian women are roundheeled sluts if given any type of an opportunity... I don't quite understand the strong consequences your husbands deal out since women over there are all dumb and are all such sluts? I mean, if the sexual morals in your country are more lax than ours...why do the husbands get so pissed? Aren't they of the same mind?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
WHERE THE HELL IS MY CAPS LOCK KEY?

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
WHERE THE HELL IS MY CAPS LOCK KEY?

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
WHERE THE HELL IS MY CAPS LOCK KEY?

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BaronScrewtapeBaronScrewtapeover 12 years ago
This...

... seems like a synopsis of a story, instead of being the story. Like there should be more meat to it.

Good synopsis, but this tale needs a few pages added to it.

Just my humble opinion.

Thanks for writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
the author should be called

winterfag, all of his stories are gay just like his fucked up brit ass

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Bullshit

Bullshit Bullshit Bullshit, find a grammar coach, find an editor and then after you reach puberty write something that's worthy of adult reading and write about it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
To "BULLSHIT"

Strange, I don't see any of your stories posted here. Winterfrog's first language is not English and yet, he expresses himself better in his second language then you do in your first. Give yourself a break, and the rest of us as well, QUITE READING!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Horrible but good.

I don't tend to like stories with that level of disrespect towards the woman. Still, it was very well written, although it is quite clear English is not your first language. Seriously, kudos . For the haters, don't forget it's fantasy and she's not real. Fantasy is very different. If my wife were to actually cheat on me I'd be heartbroken, and if she were raped I'd be homicidal. I am okay when she carries these fantasies out with another man, though, as long a she is open about it. Rape is a horrible crime, but I let her consensually act it out with her lover, even though it is uncomfortable for me to watch. In the end, when she fucks her lover, she is in control whatever the fantasy is, and I think stories are the same.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveabout 11 years ago
Damn

The fucking cheating whore skank slut cunt wives got off too easy in this tale. Both should die. I only disrespect women who deserve no respect. You cunts out there know who you are.

TavadelphinTavadelphinalmost 11 years ago
Now that was intersting -

We in the US travel around the country and find mostly similar ethics, culture and laws to live within - there is a lot of diversity but still it is a shared culture -

You travel around Europe to totally different countries with completely differing everything - from ethics to culture to hoe women are perceived that are far greater than any basic regional differences here - we have variance but it is most significant around religious choice or fundamental bias that crosses regional lines and is usually not the majority view - it is far less likey for a woman to be so victimised so easily unless they leave the country as they did in your story -

Certainly not impossible we have sick people too - but far less likely

LickideesplitLickideesplitalmost 10 years ago
Amputation

Winterfrog forgot to mention that both ladies had to have their clits amputated because they got infected by ass-to-pussy sex! Oh, yes ... and each one's dog died of mysterious causes! Not to mention significant transmission trouble in each one's car! Moral? Don't fuck around in the Adriatic!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Stupid

This story is horrible. It is not made any better by the poor English he writes in. I applauded you for having a second language but if you want to write in English have someone proof read it for you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Excellent!

I wish I knew which country in Scandinavia you were from so I could write, "Bravo, bellissimo" in your native tongue!

And I'd really like to meet your doctor so he could prescribe me whisky and wine!

jtwheelsjtwheelsalmost 5 years ago
Only saving part clap

Cheaters

26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
Good outcome

Good outcome for both cheating bitches, but should have been worse.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
Good guy

That Mikis. He took what she gave freely, as did all the others. If she didn't want to do it, why did she have so many orgasms? Good old Mikis had his fun, made a profit doing it, and had the decency to even let the whore's husband know that his wife was a slut. Good guy.

dark2donut2dark2donut2over 2 years ago

LOL, rather preposterous. The last paragraph is somewhat telegraphic, how did husband got infected when he knew she was slutting in Greece? Not very smart.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Ella's got a bum deal and deserves her own story with her due revenge on Mikis.

BSreaderBSreader2 months ago
When

You set out to lie.

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