All Comments on 'Dream Lover'

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msboy8msboy8almost 19 years ago
Good Story

I don't know if there will be a sequel, but you set the stage for it. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Good story but..

Not to be to touchy but why would he actually make her a vampire anyway after telling her, he's not going to hurt her?

Keep writing though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
....

good writing, but a hellva boring ending!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
I liked it

dont worry about those other bitches, i liked you story :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
loved it heaps

its great keep it up !!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Was It a Dream...Or Was It Not?

Alot of thought went into to this story...or was it factual? Interesting how you took a dream and made it real...or was it real and you're trying to pass it as a dream?

gkingdiamond

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I like the erotic sexy scene. And the vampire part

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