All Comments on 'Family Swim'

Rape is never right, but unfortunately many people aren't TAUGHT enough respect for each other to prevent it. Brother and sister may "experiment" with each other sexually, but there still should be limits and an absolutely dedication towards respecting each others wishes. In this story if the sister had openly protested, the brother should have stopped IMMEDIATELY! No questions asked. But it is only a work of fiction and fantasy, not reality; remember that above all else!

Tell your brother you have a rape fantasy and connect. Liked your story.

Good one. Very sexy.

started good but you killed it when he raped her and no way would she react that way when he was done she would have run away or pushed him into the pool keep it realistic. i want my time back also next time if you need to add rape to a story put it in the nonconsensual area what an asshole your story gives young impressionable guys the idea that it is ok to treat girls that way you have a responsability as a writer to not give false information

This story sounds like RAPE to me!

just another sick rape story that SHOULD HAVE BEEN POSTED IN THE NONCONSENT AREA

YOU ARE SICK IF YOU THINK RAPE IS SEXY, EROTIC OR ANY OTHER WORD

YOU WANT TO USE.

Rape is never erotic. It is stupid and demeaning.