All Comments on 'Baby I'm With You'

this is an openly warm, romantic beauty of a poem. I love the rhythm you set and your word choices are virtually perfect. And the ending...sigh.... :)

Beautiful and romantic,

lovely writing,

lovely piece,

i loved it.

thanks.

~ J

nice to see your work again..guess you'll miss the surf ..I would...thanks..blue

Beautiful free verse poem. Love it!

and the last 2 lines certainly leaves the piece heavy in feeling.......nicely done.......don

And here is yet another way to say, "I love you."

...hits you where you live. Very moving. A powerful expression of love.

of emotion you brought

to mind, but one lasting

thought...you left,

sacrifice.

5*+ ! -sGp-

ZZZZzzzzz. . . .

Whether at the Seashore or the mountains ~ Baby I'm with you.

to a mountain hideaway. TK U MLJ LV NV