All Comments on 'Mommy and Me'

I woud like to know what she dose whin she wants to start not him?

That's all.

Stan

The theory is promising, but how it was told was VERY weak! You get a 3.

entire story line was rather weak.. but had an interesting twist towards the end.. perhaps it can be brought up by another chapter and the use of an editor.

The obviously talented author is in his early 20s, and has a strong interest in tales of hot motherfucking. But IS should understand that true motherfucking is based on love and lust. Brutality has no place. Whips, indeed. A mother opens her mommy-hole to her boy, the boy slides his hard young cock up the same cunt he came out of--what is that but a loving action? When the boy unloads his young balls and shoots his mother full of his semen, he is demonstrating the purest love there can be between two human beings.

Indian mother, with long blonde hair? Right. Long cock? On an Indian man? 5 inches, maybe, but those guys are notorious for not packing much in the pants-pistol department, maybe this is why you're overcompensating so much. Indian Stallion indeed!

And all the spelling mistakes? No, just no. I couldn't decide if this was a put-on, or a real piece of crap, but I came down on Option 2. Learn to write about things you know about, or fuck off and stay fucked off. That is all.

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