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by absintheminddgrl
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Maria2394almost 19 years agokinda lke this one
but I feel it could really use some restructuring. Just a little more time spent on this baby- add some punctuation, clarify a couple of things, etc. I like the dread I felt in this poem, and the guilty humor as well. hOpe to see you post more :)
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