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18-Year-Old Cheerleading Sister!

byUncle Pervey©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/06/05

Length of Poem

This poem, although a wonderfully thought out work, was much too long. I seem to have lost interest in it after reading about how the brother described every single body part (in length) while narrating the poem.

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by Anonymous01/01/06

Gay Rhymes Dude

Never, ever rhyme the word "Drink"
Meat? Meat? Oh yeah, can Dad meet your sister??

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by LeBroz01/26/07

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Every boy's most vivid wet dream.

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by Anonymous04/18/07

Uncle Pervey's Indiscretion

Very sick, equally disturbing: in brief, well-done.

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by sexysmile06/04/08

Imaginable

I am not a huge fan of rhymed poetry but I will not hold your chosen format against you. Pretty darn good!

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by Anonymous05/28/13

Hell yea

Gotta love a cocksucking cheerleader cumslut

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