All Comments on 'Orgasm Under Color of Authority'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Missing

Did you forget the rest of it? The end is too sudden. Shame

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
good story line

This author has a good sense of "writing dialog, but the senerio had no real conflict. I mean, reluctance is what idea you get from the words "Color of Authority".

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
keep on it

great start, great use of language, need more character development. keep writing you have great potential

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