All Comments on 'Dinner is Served'

by Salvor-Hardon

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sophia janesophia janealmost 19 years ago
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Yes, please!! Love this poem (and the idea behind it).

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
Another good piece

I have enjoyed all your

poems today and look forward

to reading more in the future.

Thanks.

~ J

absintheminddgrlabsintheminddgrlalmost 19 years ago
time to eat?

wow! this is wonderful....very funny (and now I'm kinda hungry *wink*)

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 19 years ago
rhyme

can be good or horrible, rarely anything in-between. You did a good job with this one. It was enjoyable to read and had a good rhythm. I bet you could do a great job with forms like a villanelle, terzanelle, sonnets, for example.

kimbaleekimbaleeabout 16 years ago
hmmm...

sounds like a great time to me... I'll have what she's having...

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