All Comments on 'Breath of Life'

take as much air as you need...<grin> nice poem~

I was kinda sad when it

finished because i wanted

to read more! Lovely poem.

Thanks.

~ J

....but felt it fell apart in the last couple of lines which feel out of place. I enjoy rhyming works and you held the rhythm well.

Tess

The rhythm and rhyme works unusually well

So much so that it serves to give huge impact to

The ending's dissonance.