That blew me away,
very well written, my
favourite poem today!
has been mentioned in todays reviews.
I enjoyed your shade, blue~
describe the elements and earth in such exquisite detail, blue! Everytime you do that, I look out My window from here in My den and see the beauty surrounding Me. I realize then what I take for granted or simply overlook in day to day life. You are My poetic reminder to stop and take in a drink of that which is provided for My visual enjoyment in this world. Thank you, blue.
Here's another oldie ~
This from just a year ago;
Especially like these lines:
"a dry desert weeps upon petals
of its budding blossoms"
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