All Comments on 'The Birthday Present'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Just right

Author has sense enough not to turn this into a orgy.

The story stopped at the right place and leaves the future to the readers imagination.

Good work.

kydreamrkydreamralmost 19 years ago
Why wonder what she'll think of next year?

He should be wondering how he's going to surprise her for HER next birthday!

Sensuous StorytellerSensuous Storytellerover 18 years agoAuthor
Thank you

I appreciate your comments and want to thank you for them.

Ky, I agree, maybe I will have to see what he will give HER next year.

I also appreciate the comment on not making the story into an orgy. I believe that less is more sometimes and things truly erotic are often very simple and soft. Thanks for noticing that.

I hope you take the time to peek at a few other stories I have written and thank you again for your comments.

Misty/Sensuous Storyteller

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
So When

So when she brings home a big black cock for his next surprise is he going to be willing to open her present for her, or yet be opened by her present.

26thNC26thNCabout 3 years ago
Two

Two whores and a real dick in a silly story.

Sheep_DogSheep_Dog14 days ago

Too short, but with an interesting twist of real life thrown in to change the expected direction.

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It's been over 20 years since I have written many of these stories. I love coming back to see if new readers are stopping by. All comments are welcome.... Thank you for reading my stories. Readers are a writer's dream come true. -Misty-