All Comments on 'The Solitary Arrow Ch. 14'

Wow, that was hot. The writing was great as usual and you've set-up more paths for the story to travel.

i do think this might be one of the best stories i've read on this site. keep up the good work, good sir. although i'm sure we'll all be saddened we dont get to come home each day to a new chapter. carry on!

this has been a gem of a good story so far and i just lucked in on it while surfing

Thanks a lot; if I wanted deviant sex I'd go to a category that caters to it. You have ruined this tale because there is no way they love each other if they will indulge in such hedonistic behavior. Why the hell bother to to invent such likable characters and then trash them with reprehensible behavior? I just don't give a shit now.

The writing is good but your dialogue is superb. These are well fleshed out likeable characters. Threesomes not withstanding. I'm enjoying the story immensely. Thanks.

On Track

Lol , says one of the finest writers on Lit:)