I would love to read more of James and Janet's night at the dinner party! Especially since she thinks he is gay and he thinks she is the one. what a conundrum;)
q>"and looked like the hot guy next door, who was unfortunately gay."
Nice read. Do becareful with the errors though. You introduce her as Miss James and not Janet to Marie. Kinda distracting.
This could be the start of interesting developments.I am curious.
But have your French sentences checked by an editor who speaks French. Your computer generated "French" is awfully off and distracting.
But what a tease! It's disappointing to become involved in a story to have it end so abruptly. Good start. And a comment to readers....the next door neighbor is gay and gorgeous and for a straight girl this IS an unfortunate situation....to desire someone who is unattainable. The boss is straight and fortunately as gorgeous as the gay neighbor.
great beginning, thank you,I like very much your style
loved the story but please your French is horrendous!! :D please write more!
I speak French, and all of yours was obviously computer generated. Stop trying to be something you're not. It comes off as very immature writing.
Thought it was an ok story, ended kind of abruptly. As another who speaks French please please ask someone who does, the free translation sites don't get the context right every time or at all.
I really enjoyed the story and then it came to a quick end. It needs a happily ever after ending!!!!
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!
orBack to Janet
orMore submissions by OrgasmingLover.
Edit comment orSubmit Comment
Comment posted successfully - click here to view it or write another.
Title of your comment:
Your public comment about Janet:
Please type in the security codeYou may also listen to a recording of the characters.
Title your feedback:
Your feedback to OrgasmingLover:
If you would like a response, enter your email address in this box:
Feedback sent successfully - click here to write another.
Login or Sign Up
All contents © Copyright 1998-2012. Literotica is a trademark. No part may be reproduced in any form without explicit written permission.
Terms Of Services|Report A Problem|Privacy
Password:Forgot your password?
Your current user avatar, all sizes:
You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.
Select new user avatar:
Upload and save
User avatar uploaded successfuly and waiting for moderation.