All Comments on 'Open The Cellar Door'

just had such a nice feeling and the last verse just seemed to take it away...was that intended? *blue*

I wanted a hard end. Get your asses to the beach, see

things by the light of day. The mind can get too dark,

and we ain't as smart as we think we are. sandspike

This bit drew a smile:

you age and wilt with worry

in your own self importance

Then I thought I'd tell you that the second verse was my favorite, cause it was. Until I read the ending!

Great job, I relate totally!

Thanks

...my muse quit on the Slow/Cellar Door challenge. You set the standard frighteningly high, SS.

Tess

To me there seems to be an excellent balance between imagery and opinion. I love Open The Cellar Door! Great writing.

Wow. Very bold and straight forward.

Flowed so smooth, such an interesting lil ride.

What a picture you have painted with this one.

Yes I most def. think you got your *hard* ending.

Carried it off beautifully~!!

was perfect.