All Comments on 'Salt Water And Cum'

First you worthless purveyor of idiocy, a tryst is between people of the opposite sex. A blank page would have had more erotic appeal than what you tried to accomplish. Give it up and I repeat GIVE IT UP! Smeg is the word for you, for your effort and for what you are.

From the beginning of the story: *You get completely undressed and pull my clothes off while I lick and suck and tongue-fuck your ass.* Explain to me how it's possible to undress someone while that person is licking your ass? Impossible, you can do better if you put a little thought into it.

Quite hot. You could admittedly use a bit more practice as a writer, but overall, very sexy scene, very enjoyable.

This didn't happen. It's the "writer's" imagination. The "writer" evidently cannot create anything but a clichd scenario.

that senario wouldh've been great after each of you ejaculated twice... but highly unlikely.After fucking and sucking on the beach, who needs cloths anyway. Just walk home naked....public nudity is as awesome as taking a thick load of sperm in your ass mmmmm

Lube on pubes, please.