All Comments on 'Burning Desire'

by 1Kiki

Sort by:
  • 4 Comments
liferguyliferguyalmost 19 years ago
Jewel

Very sweetly & tenderly written... gave me goose bumps...

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
from the airport....

down is what really made this piece fly for me. overall though i enjoyed it, and nicely done.....don

MacDukeMacDukeover 18 years ago
Stirring Between the Knees

Loved "the stirring between the hips" (and knees). Where did you learn to write such beautiful, wistful poetry? To be treasured always.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Brilliant

One of the Best. And if this is non erotic to you. . . . . . I suggest the rest give up!

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
user1Kiki@1Kiki
36 Followers
If you don't wanna love me then I'll find somebody else who will, I'll find another kind of thrill...I'll find another way to fill this loneliness....*Cowboy Troy* ~*Is gonna shine even when others expect me to fail. I am gonna survive just about anything life throws my way...