All Comments on 'A Secret Place Ch. 04'

... you have too many grammatical errors and type-os. You really need to get an editor for your stories. Keep writing, I'm wondering what will happen next.

Hi,

I LOVE your stories. They really grabbed my attention. They really got me going.

Thank you. All I need now is to find a garden like that.

Nicole

bhorseridden@yahoo.com

Absolutely superb!

Yes I do wish I had a place like that. Being fucked like that would be the best. Don't worry about people putting you down. Story so good didn't even notice any mis spelled words. Write more. Damn good Job!!!!!!!

continue this series please!

That was the best story that I have read in a very long time. I didn't notice any errors, and you have a very good imagination to be able to come up with this story. In my opinon it is very original, I've never read anything like it. Keep writing!!!!!! I can't wait to read the rest.

Do you have more?

MORE PLEASE

You're good, I will say that my friend. This is pretty good stuff and I've read every chapter thus far. Please come out with more.

Dude I love your stories! Keep them up!

loved this please write more I will gladly read it all.