All Comments on 'Waiting in Line'

i like here and i can see the hesitant feeling too. it flowed nice from my standpoint.......don

about this till the last two lines,

and that brought it all into focus.

shy, tender, a little sad.

a wonderful little poem packed with all the longing of a shy woman.

Thank you

Flows really well and

the imagery is wonderful,

Good work,

Thanks.

~ J