by Panty_Licker
YOU brought me to the very edge,,, Then pull tight on the safety rope as I stand on the edge with one foot resting on loose rock & gravel,,, GAWD U R a TEASER...
cliffhanger or erotica which is it going to be,if cliffhanger i go some where else.
what is this bullshit, finish the story motherfucker!!!
good job :P
i feel exactly like the rest who posted before me. *joins the crowd*
I understand that some people were a bit annoyed because i left it on a bit of a cliff hanger... but it was intentional... after all i have to keep you interested enough to come back to read further episodes :)
It is taking quiet a while for the site editors to accept my stories for one reason or another so as a result the gap between my posting and actually showing up on the site is taking longer and longer.
I never meant to spoil anyones enjoyment so maybe i should find an editor who will take on my work so that it will be shown much quicker.
Thanks for all your replies and patience.
I loved your stories very much..Is it possible they are true..I hope so..When are you going to tell us about your ramming your cock inside her Sweet Pussy and fucking her? She needs you to take care of her...
I read the first and second part and am eagerly awaiting for the next part to come out so I can enjoy the hottest reading material available. You are a great writer. Keep it coming.
Hope that we get more chapters with this story I really enjoy your stories
This story had me right on the verge of cumming till I just had to let myself spunk everywhere!! Great writing, really made me horny as hell.
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter..
I know you've had some people being critical about the cliffhangers but I thinks its good - keeps the interest! It would be a crime to leave this storyline to only three submissions tho!
it would have been better if you had stopped with chapter 1 you totally ruined the story with the unrealistic crap you wrote in this one no guy would ever act like that he would be so pissed at her that he would avoid her and ignore her going so far as to leave the room when ever she entered keep it believable or put it in the fantacy area
Dont have the mom join in, ugh there are so many of them kind of stories around do something "fresh"
started off OK then went down the pan faster than a lead loaded turd - especially when the mom saw them and he lost it - pure bull shit and it could have been so much better and entertaining had you thought it out more.
pls continuee, its so nice n interesting, making it more humilation n raw words
I would love to hear more! Its going in a great direction. Ur very good at not giving to much up so u always have me wanting more!
"Good Story but..
Dont have the mom join in, ugh there are so many of them kind of stories around do something "fresh""
Totally agree. Mom fuckes it up. But the story is 5 star without
If mom joins is waaay to unrealistic and not sexy.
Fuck babe i need more,my puss gushed all over my bedroom wall,please add more chapters, i also love the other stories with the mature lady ao make more stories of those too please i beg u
The dog needs to write some more.
You certainly have me curious as to the big surprise that happens next.
Bring it on.
great storie but could you make them longer maybe a few pages
This has me as excited as the real thing. I've just got to come.
Please you NEED to continue this is the sexiest story I've ever read in this sight! I got so wet I actually sniffed my own panties after reading! Please write more!!
sooooooo fucking good imagood doggy too please piss on force me fuck
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My stepdad has been sniffing my panties for years. This story makes me wish I had a brother too.very hot writing. I'm stacy18_bi at Hotmail if you want to hit me up. Sounds like we have a lot in common
This needs more chapters, you can't leave us hanging like that.
Premise still good.
Ending with mother appearing a let down.
Better if sister had 'petted' her little doggy, playing with his cock and balls.
Three stars.