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To die and die and die

within myself

alone.

I know that feeling all to well!

I loved the raw emotion that

charged through this piece,

it gave me chills.

Great poem

Thank you.

~ J

will read this one several times just to savor its beauty Anna...thanks...blue

What happened to you in the last 3 stanzas? I expected stage blood!

Good to there.

Fly

Powerful poem, Miss swirls. A wild ride.

Tess

takes a deep plunge into copulation's opaqueness and expresses in intensely love wrought verse her needs to meld into one. I have seen many great things come from your pen, anna, but this one has reached down to My heart and affixed itself there. Just awesome, woman!

Vixxx

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