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Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
This sizzles

right from the start!

Masterfully written

Nary a knuckle to unbuckle

as fingers frizzle the cloth

to put one's whole

into what it devours

even love tainted sour

to feed the need

to grasp and hold,

another.

Wonderful writing

Thanks.

~ Jenn

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
I am impressed!!!!

I felt this down to the bottom of my soul Art. I feel this is one of the first "ART" poems. This is you ... and it is stunning. Thank you for allowing us in..

blessings

du~

Mentioned in the Sunday reviews

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
i wonder if....

them are brass knuckles....because i'm seeing things here that i haven't before. this piece is very reflective. this is smoothly written and with nice flow. super job art.........don

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
climbing the mountains

just to see the other side...what a ride eh...great pen...love your writes as always...lol/blue

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
~~

joy in another

and in the finding

confirmation

affirmation

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