All Comments on 'Arabian Night'

You transported me to that place, and I could see, feel and taste every sensation! Please write some more!

Excellent story. Definately up for night 2

I am a grammar Dominatrix (grin) and I appreciate your clean, readable, sentences. The descriptions are terrific, and very visual, good work!

oh, and it's a very sexy little scene to boot-

That makes three thumbs up from me!

Very luxurious setting and style. Rich and sweet, like a bite of honeyed baklava melting on the tongue. And lots of commas (mmmm, commas).

Get these two together again soon, or give us a prequel explaining why he was at her mercy, or what his harem thinks about a dancing girl getting all the sheik's action. And more commas.