All Comments on 'Roughly Ridden'

Fast paced, sexy, and leaves the reader wanting more!

So give us some more!

;)~

decent enough story but this would suit Erotic Couples. There's no Non-Consensual/Reluctance elements here.

I agree, wrong category but wonderful story non the less.

Keep writing!

Rainbow_carnage

I love how you prolonged the actual act of sex without it becoming boring. Absolutely magnificent.

Cal = hott. ty.

I agree with the person below. Where can I get my own Cal?

So freakin hot!

Love it...but, not quite what I expected in this category.

hot hot hot and oh yea did i say hot?

Hey,

Ive fucked alot of cowboys in my dads barn and honey thats just what we do! well done!

this is the first comment I've left before, but that was extremely hot. would love to read more

WOOF! Very well done. Loved the momentum.

Loved the story and hope that you will write sequals to this story in the future!

Delicious. I want more rugged, strong, sexy, dangerous men...

This was not a non-consent story, but that's my only complaint. Well-written. Great job.

Really enjoyed this. Please continue the story!!!!

Well-written story, not so much non-consent or reluctance though so it's in the wrong area. But very enjoyable.

Oh God,please write more, I'm so wet.

Yeah, these young white cunts need to be ridden hard by huge black cocks. He should fuck her regularly and get his mates to join in the fun. That way she is sure to become pregnant.

than the previous commenter, whose dick is probably white, undoubtedly small, flaccid and attached to an utterly clueless man who can only dream of pleasing a woman as well as Cal.

This is a great scene, very hot. I think it would also fit in the BDSM category (a category I much enjoy). I love that his roughness seems to stem from his desire (which could be enhanced with a little more exposition from his POV) as much as his natural dominance, and that he pleases Haley (thus enticing her back for more--I know I would be).

I think that with thorough proof-reading and a bit of more of Cal's POV, this great story would be even better.

Thank you!

How is this in here when there is no sign of reluctance and the act is completely consentual from both sides? Not a real complaint, just found it amusing. Great story!

God Damn your story is so fucking hot! I'm printing this out. I would love for every single action you describe in your story, to happen to me. But, what girl wouldn't have this fantasy. Thank you very much!

That was by far one of the sexiest stories I've seen here! I'm also going to print it. Thank you so much for this and please write more ! You certainly have a gift! Thanks again! Sincerely Mike.

this story made me cum so much! I wish a guy would do that to me

Wish you would do that to me

Thanks for the ride.

When are you going to write another chapter after all it's only the beginning of a great story Hmmm really wish you would continue it .....

He did to her was make her happy and more than satisfied. Her persistence pays off so she can get it hard!

Without a doubt probably the best story I have EVER read!!!!!!! ;) He sounded un-fucking-believably hot and big and sexy and oh so damn yummily rough!!!!! God I would do absolutely anything to get fucked like that, she is sooooooooooo lucky!!! You have to write more for these two. YOU JUST FUCKING HAVE TO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PS as a true southern girl, and as a rancher/equestrian to boot, the setting of this just made it all the more insanely erotic ;)

are two different things. This was a great story, but I don't get putting it in this category.

But not really non-consent. It seemed from the ending that there would be more coming. I hope you decide to add more chapters.

Save a horse ride a cowboy indeed

This was a hot story, but why would she wear jeans in she wanted him to stare at her body? If she's a Hunter-Jumper, Eventer or Hunt rider, then she should wear riding britches that are much tighter than jeans. Plus, if she's a serious rider, where was her trainer? Most preparation for events are done in either a class environment or under private instruction and Show Barns can be busy places and there really isn't any space in the stables for a truly private conversation. How many other riders (not to mention stablehands) witnessed their exchange? Given the set up to the piece, it seems the tryst wouldn't have been all that private. Still, it was hot.

And miss out on the sexiness of it all!

This is one hell of a hot story and honestly I want more! Give me more!

Good lord, that was smokin' hot! I loved the sense of menace you built from the beginning, and boy did Cal ever deliver in the end. Kudos!

Sexiest story I have read on any website . My ultimate fantasy has always been to cocktease my man until he turns on me and rather roughly fucks me stupid. Having a guy who knows what he wants is a real turn on for most girls in my case its mainly because I can convince myself I have no choice I give him the goods or he just takes it if I don't either way im going to be well and truly shafted so I might as well relax and enjoy . It is such a confusing feeling when im being dominated and feel I have to do as he says the slut within wont come to the fore and I have to feel like a real slut to enjoy my orgasm and luckily for me I am a cockloving slut who quite simply adores good hard cock

Wow! That was one hell of a good story! I hope you write more about this! Cal was so sexy the whole story...no wonder Haley wanted him.

This is the way to be taken. Cal was fantastic, this girl should be following him around days... I would. I am wet, could use a Cal once in a while... Thanks for the story

That, right there, is how you fuck a woman. I'd love to have this done to me.

Pretty hot story. Really liked Cal's style. A man's man. Firm, rough,assertive and knows how to dominate what he wants.when he wants it. Knows how to take a woman and show her who's in charge.and guide her . Hope to see more of this story . I enjoyed reading this. 5 stars for sexualness. And Cal.

The only way it could have been better would have been him finishing in her ass....maybe with a couple stable hands secretly watching to set up her fist gangbang and DP

You have a way with words - I hope you manage to get some of your books finished because you are a talented writer. Keep up the good work!

Rough fucking. Makes me wish I had a barn. But now that I think of it, I do have a lot of land and not too many neighbors. Also a garden.

Makes me feel to be in place of Haley

I'm so horny rn

I loved this! Tie me up, spank me, fuck me! Dominate me!! It makes me cum so hard!!

six stars

Rough and Ready! 5 stars!!!

Verry. Good. Xx. Skype. Peter.lowe. 561. Of. Surrey, England.

Excellent and very arousing!

Twice I lost control, while reading it, and wanted to masturbate; but I am twelve only, so I managed not to insert finger inside. Later my Didi (elder sister) asked me to wait for the right guy or she will arrange someone for me to pluck my cherry. She even gave a detailed account of her first time with an elderly stranger, she met accidentally two years before, when she was a little less than 15.

Good sexy story. Probably a bit on the rough side for me, my general rule is if having sex makes you bleed then you’re doing something wrong. (Virgins excl obvs)

Tess (uk)

That was…wow!

Definitely worked to get things going - but now I need to go find one of my partners and see if we can’t try to make this seem vanilla.

For anyone curious about the bleeding afterwards and people saying they’re doing it wrong: not doing it wrong, just being extremely rough. V tears happen and as long as you take responsibility for treatment (keeping clean) they’re actually fun in the moment for some of us.

Then again, some of us like it a lot more rough than this story. As long as there’s consent and communication, have fun being spicy!!

I don't care which category you posted this in, it is SO DAMN HOT!!!!! The action is prolonged to give us--and Haley--a most satisfying build up and wonderful release! Just enough Domination and roughness for me. Keep it up. You're a good writer. I'll be looking for more of your stories.

Now if you'll excuse me, I need to call my own Dom and beg for more.....