All Comments  for

folded image

bybluerains©
All
Comments (8)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by RhymeFairy07/10/05

Planted Imagery~

You have to know. I loved this poem. Very vividly you paint the picture. My minds eye echos of lost ... pain ... very moving poem here...

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous07/10/05

~

Your poem was mentioned in the Sunday reviews
du lac~

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous07/10/05

Excellent!

Spare use of language but the images are strong and I agree with Rhyme Fairy--it's a very moving poem, prayerlike.

:)
Angeline

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by My Erotic Tale07/10/05

nice vineyard blue

torns on beauty that are blue.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by dcpoet4407/10/05

images do leave....

nice things in the folds of darkness and vivid in this case.......nicely done.......don

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous07/10/05

really deep poem

This is one of your best, deep, profound and compelling... in short...perfect!

QP

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous07/11/05

What are you putting...

in your coffee? You are knocking them out of the park,
and this is a grand slam. Great layout and wording.
sand

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by LeBroz03/19/08

██

This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.



════════════════

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to folded image  or
More submissions by bluerains.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission.

Post comment as (click to select):

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel