You have to know. I loved this poem. Very vividly you paint the picture. My minds eye echos of lost ... pain ... very moving poem here...
Your poem was mentioned in the Sunday reviews
Spare use of language but the images are strong and I agree with Rhyme Fairy--it's a very moving poem, prayerlike.
torns on beauty that are blue.
nice things in the folds of darkness and vivid in this case.......nicely done.......don
This is one of your best, deep, profound and compelling... in short...perfect!
in your coffee? You are knocking them out of the park,
and this is a grand slam. Great layout and wording.
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