All Comments on 'Hot Summer Night'

Amelia you have to make your stories a bit longer. just as we get to the meat, you stop damn it. Gentlemen and ladies you do have to read this writer

As prior commenter said, "Don't stop now!" That's my only criticism that's not the top. I like how you think and see. Sly twist to the end. Do tell us more of what's in your mind and what you'd really like to have happen, in fun, explicit, wet, hot detail. Please.

Amelia, a beautifully erotic and tantalizing story. It most certainly served it purpose of exciting me. Your descriptions were very graphic (shaved, wet pussy and hardened nipples) and descriptive. Sometimes a story is more arousig when it simply leads the reader's imagaination to a "satisfying" conclution. Well Done!

Rick

very hot - I could see the movements in my mind's eye - the tease - the seduction -- very good.

Very Nice!

need I say more ? What a sensitive Seduction for this Everyman !

Keep going!!!