All Comments on 'Kate's Capture Ch. 05'

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KTHESLAVEKTHESLAVEover 18 years ago
Again.. Greatness!

Again, this part turned me on. Reading the whole, "series" you could say, is very overwhelming. I love reading your stories you write. Great work and again, cannot wait until the next part!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Wow!!

Awesome! i was so hoping that there was something new to read from you...again you've outdone yourself, and i can't wait for the next chapter. The detail and imagination is so compelling, if this series was complete (and its one of those ones...you don't want to finish, just pray it keeps going forever) i would get no rest sitting up reading reading and reading some more. i look forward to what surprises you have next. i am grateful you don't make us wait months at a time. Thank you. waiting with baited breath...a fan in Texas

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Breathless

i dont know how you do it but this was worth the wait.

You are excellent and i cant wait for the next installment.

Very very hot reading. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
wow...this is so scary and compelling

what a twist to have made the Captain a slave as well. I so wanted he and Kate to have successfully escaped in this chapter. I really wanted him to be the one to take her virginity. This is really good. I usually hate this subject matter but decided to try this series and I am so wanting to see how this continues. I hope we get to see a happy ending with a bit of retribution too. MORE SOON.

kris10ekris10eabout 10 years ago
wow!!

That was just too much....poor thing! I felt so bad for her and the captain. You have formed a wonderful plot with so many twists and turns that I began to feel her helplessness. Great job.

665I667665I667about 3 years ago

Jesus this is so dark but uh

665I667665I667about 3 years ago

*but I can't stop reading.

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