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The Ultimate Sexual Submission

byDutchMark©
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by Esther Ashland07/07/04

ahem

I think your themes of domination as love and the subtle power of the submissive are wonderful and valuable, but some of your metaphors are a bit much. I can't think of any sub who wants to be owned like a classical guitar or a rocking chair.

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by Anonymous10/17/04

i do

i do think submissives want to find that Master and Owner who takes complete possession of them. But that may just be my submissive self.

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by Zarah11/12/04

Very well written

This story was very well written. Its nice to see erotic literature become more literary.

Have you considered writing a novel?

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by Anonymous03/03/05

I Agree

I agree, it is nice to see well written stories. So many of them are written either way too short, or with lots of spelling and gramatical errors.

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by Anonymous03/16/05

Beautiful

Beautifully written; very erotic, sensitive and sensual. Nice to read something so delicately and passionately written. Thanks x

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by Anonymous11/11/05

OMG,,,I do

very sensual and beautifully written,,,reminded me of times gone by with a cyber master ..Keep up the good work

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by Anonymous11/11/05

Wow I felt it

Everything you said was very detailed... Makes me wonder what I'm missing.

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by Anonymous04/05/06

I miss you Sir

Daddy

I was researching some stories on this site and came back to read your stories. I remember when you wrote this for me.

I love you still and will always respect and admire you.

In submission,
your little girl
PS I can't recall my password to log in but if you would like to email me again, I would be so happy.
simonette28@yahoo.com

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by Anonymous06/07/06

well done

Seldom do you find well written anal erotica and to match that with the bonding of a Dom and his sub and do it so well I congratulate you. FOr that last comment the feeling of ownership is one I have found in my research all subs desire Not 24/7 but when the time is right. IT is what makes their relationships work. So well I am not a sub or a Dommne all I can say is don't knock it if you ain't tried it;-)

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by Anonymous08/24/06

Awesome!

My Daddy Dom shared this with me. I could have sworn you were there when he first took me. This is beautifully written and so inspiring. I cannot wait to see my daddy again to thank him for sharing this wonderful story.

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by TheLadyVictoria07/28/07

You must be a Dom....

....if you can write with this depth of understanding of the relationship between a Dom/me and sub, of what true submission means not only to the Dom/me, but to the sub, also. I enjoyed it thoroughly, perhaps because I identify with this Dom's philosophy about a D/s relationship and how to train a sub. I loved it! TheLadyVictoria

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by Anonymous07/28/07

As it should be..........

This story shows a true understanding of the Dom/Sub relationship as it should be. It is provocative, lusty and rings with enough truth to really be a true story. Well Done ! !

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by Anonymous10/17/09

Awesome

I loved it

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