All Comments on 'Midnight Cowboy'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
i liked it

I liked the story, but I couldn't identify with the cold weather setting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Hypothermia?

He's just going to leave her there with hardly any clothes in the middle of winter?? Does he have necrophilial tendencies? Because she will most likely have died from hypothermia before he comes back.

tagyourittagyouritover 18 years ago
Hypothermia?

He's just going to leave her there with hardly any clothes in the middle of winter?? Does he have necrophilial tendencies? Because she will most likely have died from hypothermia before he comes back.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
It's a great story!

It's hot, well paced and written and people are worrying about her getting cold? Good work, worth a 2nd story, I feel like I know the characters.

angelx602angelx602over 18 years ago
It's cold out there

I hope somwhow she gets up and freed....and if there is a next time....hopefully it won't be in the snow but maybe he comes through her dorm window while she is sleeping and surprises her? lol

angelx

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Definitely hot

...despite the chilly setting.

Very well done, very erotic. I'd like to see more of your stuff.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
sequal please?

Very nice, very hot! The only thing that would make it better is a sequal! (did i spell that right?). I like the hat, it's a nice touch.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Dom/Cowboy

gotta

luv

them

sexy

Dominant

Cowboys

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Mmmm

Best part is when he has her cum for him and call his name - that got me going! :)~

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
weather

I love that this girl just got raped and everyone's worried about the weather...lol... It's fiction. Imagine she got found two minutes later by someone with a blanket. Story is hot! Loved it!

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