All Comments on '24 Hours (1:00pm-2:00pm)'

A nice departure from the 'ooh baby ahh' style of writing in so many stories I've read. Very real!

I felt every aching need, the raw emotion, and the visceral reality of your details. You are one of the finest Lit has to offer and the site is a better place because of your talent.

If every author out here could convey in a story what you do in three paragraphs, people would stop watching porn and start reading it.

DC:

Thank You! I'm also glad you let him get some rest, I thought you were going to kill him and there's a long time to go yet. Congratulations on the whole story and to you for your sense of humor. Ronnie W.

I loved every installment and am looking forward to reading how they will fullfill the balance of their time together! Excellent job! Extremely enjoyable! Thank you!

I'm already developing a taste for fresh fruit...tho I'm thinking more of strawberries!

This is a lovely romance, with an unusual but very effective style. This heart-warming love story has a compelling plot, with wonderful romantic atmosphere throughout.