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by Willow Rain

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CuriouswifeCuriouswifealmost 19 years ago
I love your writing

You describe the moment so well.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
yes

been there -- done that

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
these two lines.......

have me on fire:

or poured fire ants

into my blood stream.

very nice read throughout.......don

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
you capture....

...the claustrophobia and angst so well. Well done. Not an easy poem to write.

Tess

TathagataTathagataalmost 19 years ago
The fire ants

was a great description but this verse really brought it all together:

~They point to my head

to my nose and the small lingering scar

from where they went in once

to take death out.~

Perfect.

I enjoy your work very much

Anonymous
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