by Balaak
The line that kept coming to my mind was, "Maybe, you should listen to the fear, Case. Maybe it's your friend."
Well written and creepy. The main character picked an interesting way to commit suicide.
Well done.
Ok what happens next? So he is in a deep dark place. What happens next, dont leave me hanging.
You have got to write a sequel. What happens next? is he commiting suicide or what? A sequel is a must, just, make it quick ok, i have got to know how this one ends!!!