All Comments on 'Young Pussy'

Wish it was me in your friend's place................

this is a great story could do with there being a second part. and longer as well but a very good story line. he has to be your best mate to let you cum in her mouth then fuck her the way you did. "WOW" what a mate to have fantastic. again i would carry the stories on as the is so much more to put in them. but none the less great bit of writing. now how about a follow up with more erotic sex in it. such as a d/p from you and the bring other,s in on the act. would like to know if you are going to do this. as well as the last story. i sent you a mail on.

My only suggestion would be to taper off the excessive use of exclamation points. I know you are excited writing this, but it comes across as cheesy. Again, though, I enjoyed the story and will be looking at your other work!

This is what fantasies are made of - well, mine are! Write some more about your slutty women and their spectator men.

Wanker

Must be time to add some more stories