All Comments on '03' Balance'

The Hawk's trust is obvious

perched upon your arm

blood trickles in small drops of love

as the Hawks talon's grasp clings

to your stability and faith

for if you scream and jerk your arm

never more will be the trust

and talons grasp will be even greater

sometimes it is best to swallow the pain

for trust and love to remain.

I enjoyed your write

And with the balance

Love's pain becomes

Bearable.

Through the valley of heartache struggling up to the summit of love ~ Someone has stepped in - life is again worth while.

Evocative and deep! Enjoyable!