All Comments on 'Self Pleasures'

by Many Feathers

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Good stuff!

this story was great, i enjoyed it very much. descriptive and very well written! keep up the good job!!

CajunBillCajunBillalmost 12 years ago
Good story, as usual

Fun ideas. Maybe a follow up?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Exciting!

Very good story. When can we expect the next part?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
so creative!

That was lovely, I't was nice to see that you even gave the customers personality. It was a very thrilling and unique story! I would love to see what other adventures take place in this interesting little business.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Exciting and stimulating

A great fun read with both exciting and arousing results

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Enjoyed

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
grammar

underground is one word

climactic,not climatic, which refers to climate

don't apostrophize plurals

ad (vertisment) has one d

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Best story I've read on here. Love the characters :) wish my boyfriend was that down

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
100% great

loved your story would love a follow up!

AtrampboyAtrampboyalmost 7 years ago
another winner!!

Once again youve written another smash hit, I hope it will also be serialized and the next days is soon to cum...

pimptasticlypimptasticlyabout 5 years ago
Loved this

This is a dream scenario. I love love love stories about people watching others masturbate and getting turned on. This takes it somewhere even better!

So hot.

Thanks!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Mmmmm

This was absolutely amazing. I'm soaked.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Ooh yes!!

Loved this story.... Made me tease my nipples and made my clit throb.... I'd love to have been there!!

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