by Many Feathers
this story was great, i enjoyed it very much. descriptive and very well written! keep up the good job!!
That was lovely, I't was nice to see that you even gave the customers personality. It was a very thrilling and unique story! I would love to see what other adventures take place in this interesting little business.
A great fun read with both exciting and arousing results
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climactic,not climatic, which refers to climate
don't apostrophize plurals
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Best story I've read on here. Love the characters :) wish my boyfriend was that down
Once again youve written another smash hit, I hope it will also be serialized and the next days is soon to cum...
This is a dream scenario. I love love love stories about people watching others masturbate and getting turned on. This takes it somewhere even better!
So hot.
Thanks!!
Loved this story.... Made me tease my nipples and made my clit throb.... I'd love to have been there!!