All Comments on 'Blow-job Initiation'

Good concepts, but you didn't go into detail with any of them, the story was far too short and it just seemed like you were giving a summary more than telling a story.

those bruises on your knees are just O so sexy!!

As well as skillful, poised, and thoughtful... all qualities that intensify the eroticism. You've served your literary influences well (here and in your other stories--couldn't help but appreciate Tomas and Sabina).

Good story, not too long, keep writing.

Thanks

Very good job of describing your feelings of the first time experience.. Keep writing!

You've been writing too many college admission essays!

Nicely done.

Sounds like you're studies are paying off for a lucky few!

Great job!

Detailed enough to evoke emotion, yet vague enough that anyone can relate. You're too talented for this kind of forum.

It reminded me so much of those days when we tried to have sex, as teens and the steps we took. I feel as though I may have dated the wrong women as this author certainly would have had me beyond anything that had happened to me.

Kevin

I just drained my balls down your throat as I read this.

I adore women who adore sucking cock.

I remember my first time sucking cock. I was a little scared but having had it done to me many times I knew what felt great and what not to do.