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Hot & Sweet
Hot and short! Fun quick read that lets you get to know the characters and feel the heat. Thanks.
I Like Licking The Frosting
Cupcakes - the cure for erectile dysfunction...
EXCELLENT
Would you like to be my cupcake?
very good
the story was very good i only have two promblems with it. one not enough sex if the lead female in tended to have her way with the other female. instead of just eatting her out she should used a strap on, on her too fucking her in her pussy and ass. plus you should of given there measurements. next time you write a lesbian story or any story . dealing with sex you have to describe the people. lesiban storys should include strapons.
Mmm.... recovering, go away
Sooo hot...
Whew! That was hot!
Wow! Very hot story--short and sweet, but really draws you in.
Lots of fun!
This story pulls you into the girls' world as tension mounts. I especially liked the cupcake bit. If an angry woman storms into your room and calls you cupcake, how is one supposed to react?
Lovely Fusion of Seemingly Conflicting Emotions
This was nicely done. I love the fact that you manage to sketch quickly characters, depict them in one way and, then, redirect the emotional tone from edgy anger to edgy lust. You do a lot with relatively few words.
BTW, I write here as Someonenew (but haven't for quite a while, unfortunately).
Cheers
i certainly enjoyed it!
the story was very good i only have two promblems with it. one not enough sex if the lead female in tended to have her way with the other female. instead of just eatting her out she should used a strap on, on her too fucking her in her pussy and ass. plus you should of given there measurements. next time you write a lesbian story or any story . dealing with sex you have to describe the people. lesiban storys should include strapons.
obviously this comment was from a man--what woman wants measurements in their erotic stories? better yet, why, exactly, does a strap-on need to be included? are you uncomfortable when a penis or phallus-figure isn't included in lesbian stories?
as for me, i loved this story. :)
aother unfinished
god it's quite irritating all the unfinished story's they start but never finish i want to read more damit
More plz
I wish it was longer
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