All Comments on 'Cupcake'

Hot and short! Fun quick read that lets you get to know the characters and feel the heat. Thanks.

Cupcakes - the cure for erectile dysfunction...

Would you like to be my cupcake?

the story was very good i only have two promblems with it. one not enough sex if the lead female in tended to have her way with the other female. instead of just eatting her out she should used a strap on, on her too fucking her in her pussy and ass. plus you should of given there measurements. next time you write a lesbian story or any story . dealing with sex you have to describe the people. lesiban storys should include strapons.

Sooo hot...

Wow! Very hot story--short and sweet, but really draws you in.

This story pulls you into the girls' world as tension mounts. I especially liked the cupcake bit. If an angry woman storms into your room and calls you cupcake, how is one supposed to react?

This was nicely done. I love the fact that you manage to sketch quickly characters, depict them in one way and, then, redirect the emotional tone from edgy anger to edgy lust. You do a lot with relatively few words.

BTW, I write here as Someonenew (but haven't for quite a while, unfortunately).

Cheers

<i>the story was very good i only have two promblems with it. one not enough sex if the lead female in tended to have her way with the other female. instead of just eatting her out she should used a strap on, on her too fucking her in her pussy and ass. plus you should of given there measurements. next time you write a lesbian story or any story . dealing with sex you have to describe the people. lesiban storys should include strapons.</i>

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obviously this comment was from a man--what woman wants measurements in their erotic stories? better yet, why, exactly, does a strap-on need to be included? are you uncomfortable when a penis or phallus-figure isn't included in lesbian stories?<p>

as for me, i loved this story. :)

god it's quite irritating all the unfinished story's they start but never finish i want to read more damit

I wish it was longer

Ahaha That was great! (: Really, the plot was capturing and the ending amusing.~

Made me cum in a matter of minutes so it did, my girlfriend rubbed my clit while I read the story, I let her play with my pussy, and lick it out with her fingers, she then let the cum run out all over the place the sheets where fucking saturated it was fucking amazing loved all of it

One of the best cupcakes I've had - it's complete and delicious as it is, but you can't help but wish the chef had prepared a large gateau.