Sex, Lies, and Confusion Ch. 01

Great Start!!

You have the start of a good story. It will be interesting to see if you will throw us a curve ball in this story like some of your other stories.

dont be a wimp ..kick your ex

friends ass andd ask for tha texplanation if she did it of her own free will kick her ass out also ...if not kick his again and make sure he wont be able to fuck without hurting for the next year and no more kiddies for him id denut his ass

Part one?!?!?!?!

why must everyone insist on splitting stories up into 17 billion parts? I hate that. Good story otherwise.

I like continuing stories!

sorry 'part 1 commenter'. I like it when good stories build, and continue on in a series :)

re: Part one?!?!?!?!

Hey., at least this guy lets you know it before you open the story. It's when they don't add chapter numbers that it's OK to be pissed.

i totally agree

why must everyone insist on splitting stories up into 17 billion parts? I hate that. Good story otherwise.

Its insulting!!!!! Its as if we cant read!!

The worst part is by the time the next one comes out you have to waste your time reading this one again because by then who the hell remembers.

Post the whole story

I agree with the others. Especially when they are such unnecessarilly short episodes.
Have I missed a new prize category on Lit for the most and shortest chapters in a story?
Write the story and post it - why is that so hard??

some data

Talk about jumping to conclusions. Aren't you at least going to find out why wife looked unhappy after motel meeting. Tou're moving out without getting any data at all. Sounds kind of stupid to me. the Ct. Yankee

nice

Good story, but I think hubby needs more proof before he goes to far with this.

Short

Too short.

Nice setup on this!

I hadn't read this for a while. I really like the way this starts.

Regards, DJ

Goo start

Hmmmm... somehow I missed this story by The Wanderer. Good setup chapter.

Excellent Setup

At this point we think we know everything of importance except why the devil the wife wants to get it on with him alll the time and still has a lover on the side. Then there is the question of his intuitive reaction to her body language as she left the motel.

FUCKING SLUT

To be a successful writer,one must be literate !!

This writer obviously isn't. Perhaps lack of education, perhaps decadence. In any case it resulted in difficult reading.
I always hated bastardized gutter English. A writer should not show his ignorance by using it !! A neet "1".

SO FAR CONFUSION IS ALL INSIDE HIS HEAD

and he should be thinking about the 50 ways. TK U MLJ LV NV

Very!!

Interesting.