All Comments on 'Post-Game Social'

A well written story, nice grammar, but perhaps to passively written to be exceptionally erotic. You might want to try adding dialogue and some tension between the principals.

It caught my eye probably only because Rugby stories are rare (I play, too), but I would really like you to continue with this story. Your descriptions are awesome. More Rugby please? :)

Hi, really liked your story. Only thing I can suggest is that it needs to be longer and I would like it even more if you turned up the heat a little! Ken

Would that I have read this sooner, an insight into someone that I'd give my ability to write to learn more about. Good job, superb even. Simple and beautiful, honest and true, too bad I hadnt learned to be those things sooner eh? Another life perhaps.

I have to say I loved this story.

And can totally relate.